Skiing
The long drive here had made my head a little dizzy. I opened the car door expecting it to be so cold that it would freeze my toes off. But no I was actually quite snug inside my layer upon layer clothing.
"Ha, ha, ha! you look ridiculous and fat in all those jackets Nina." It was my little brother Darcy. "Oh well you can't say much Darcy, have a look at yourself!" I say making him feel silly.
People are flying everywhere on there slim skis. How can I ever do this I think to myself, but not soon after I'm whizzing down the snowy slope and having the time of my life.
"My fingers feel frozen," I tell my parents. "Well then, why don't we get some nice hot food." My dad suggests. We all agree that it is a great idea and we all waddled off to the hot food shack.
"Mmmmm. This food is delicious" I say taking a great big crunch out of my hot crispy chips. "Well, did you kids enjoy your skiing trip?" My mum says wondering. We all looked at each other and said "It was great!" All at the same time.
Hi Nina, I really enjoyed this recount. I can really imagine you and Darcy speaking like you have written. I noticed one mistake. Can you change 'there' to 'their' in this sentence: People are flying everywhere on there slim skis. Do you think you will go skiing this year?
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your recount my favourite bit was when Darcy said
"Ha, ha, ha! you look ridiculous and fat in all those jackets Nina." It was my little brother Darcy. "Oh well you can't say much Darcy, have a look at yourself!" I say making him feel silly.
did you have any silly accidents? when you were skiing I think you must of felt relieved to get out the car. Romilly.
Hi Nina you have got a lot of blog post wow and cops look great -katief
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